Haitien carnival is every february, when February is coming, people's always preparing a lot stuff to make the carnival awesome, and beaitiful .
If someone someone went to the Haitian carnival you will see everything, and you will like the way we made our carnival, like the music, the lights, you will like everything that we made, a lot beautiful stuff, and a lot truck's with light, people's dancing, big music and loud.
I never participate in carnival, because it's a dangerous stuff, and people fight all the time, and they dranking, and I don't want this happened to me.
Ally my favorite thing about the carnival was, I like watching when those people's passing in the streets, dancing, scared people, and little kids,. And I always love the music.
Kevin,
ReplyDeleteThank you! You did a nice job of describing Carnival! I can hear the music coming from those trucks in the parade!
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Great job Kevin, the carnival sounds like a load of fun.
ReplyDeleteI liked reading this because I have never heard about the carnival before.
ReplyDeleteGreat job kevin . I lvoed hearing about the carnival.
ReplyDeletei never thought people fight at such a beautiful and interesting event i liked hearing about this
ReplyDeletei never thought people fight at such a beautiful and interesting event i liked hearing about this
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